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雅思大作文议论文高分范文解析:家庭话题

  Children should always follow their parents'advice.

  To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

  Key words analysis

  children: 孩子们,是child的复数形式

  follow: 遵从

  advice: 建议,是一个不可数名词,如要表示一条建议,则说a piece of advice

  Argument:

  这是属于议论文中的argument类型,通常会在agree或disagree之间进行选择。但是该题特别提到说to what extent do you agree or disagree,那么我们最好是能够讨论到这个时间的两个方面,然后给出自己的意见。

  Possible reasons:

  孩子的经历较少,遇到事情可能不知道如何处理,爸妈的建议很重要

  孩子很多时候没办法看清一些事情,需要父母分析问题

  有的时候,孩子需要独立思考的空间,毕竟他们才最了解自己所需要的

  Model Essay 1 – Part 1

  Introduction

  Some people say that children should always follow their parents'advice; others claim that this is not always right. I believe that children should follow their parents' advice when they are young,but they should become more independent when they are older.

  Main body 1

  Young children do not know the difference between right and wrong, and a parent is the best person to teach them this.For example, a young child does not know that it is wrong to take things that do not belong to them. Parents can also teach children about dangers, both in the home and outside.

  Model Essay 1 – Part 2

  Main body 2

  However, when children grow older they should pay less attention to their parents. This is because parents might tell a child which career to choose, and this should be the child's decision.Parents sometimes want to tell their children how to live, but when they are grown up. they can decide for themselves. If a child doesn't make their own decisions, he or she might grow up to be less independent and strong.

  Conclusion

  In conclusion, parents need to give young children advice on morals and safety, but not on how to live when they are older.

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